• Active Reading,  ELA-110-H16 Work,  Integrating Ideas

    Barclay Paragraph Practice

    In our modern-day world, individuals tend to exhibit empathy by responding reactively rather than proactively to tragic circumstances, as the aftermath of a tragedy can bring public attention to the suffering of many individuals. If individuals were more proactive than reactive in facing global challenges, empathy would likely propagate with greater ease. In the brief argumentative and thought-provoking essay “Is Empathy Overrated” by Canadian-American psychology professor Paul Bloom, he asserts, “Imagine learning that a faulty vaccine has caused Rebecca Smith, an adorable eight-year-old, to get extremely sick. If you watch her suffering and listen to her and her family, the empathy will flow, and you’ll want to act. But suppose…

  • Peer Review,  Revision

    Essay #3 Revision Questions

    After a thorough and meticulous analysis of my third essay draft, I firmly believe that the checklist element I was the most proficient in was the How Effective Is What You Say?, while the area I needed to focus my efforts on was the Have You Tied It All Together? piece. The main focus of my essay was to tune out the negativity expressed by others when I am genuinely in a content mood, with the intention of preserving my most positive and authentic self. I truly feel as if I was able to excel in the How Effective Is What You Say? aspect considering that I explicitly show my…

  • ELA-110-H16 Work,  Peer Review

    Peer Review #1 Reflection

    The specific feedback and comments I received on my first essay draft primarily integrated of weaving in elements of my own existential encounters, and introducing a richer tier of my own life journey and situations that resonate and connect to both Adrian Chen and Maria Konnikova’s eye-opening and thought-provoking essays. My peer collaborator who refined my work predominantly proposed that that I identify and engage more closely with the texts. Some of the comments she left were to “add comparisons on a deeper level with this certain text”, or “be more specific in this experience”, or “elaborate more on this belief you hold”. As far as resolving these concerns, I infused…

  • Active Reading,  ELA-110-H16 Work,  Integrating Ideas

    Ross Gay Reading Questions

    1.) Respond, in your own words, and referencing your own experiences, to the validity of Gay’s question: “What if joy and pain are fundamentally tangled up with one another?”  Gay references this particular quote to display how certain content moments might also harbor a sense of sorrow. To illustrate, if an individual is transitioning from high school to college, there could be joy in that instance of fostering one’s own self-actualization and self-sufficiency in college, but there could also be sorrow in leaving their home world behind. There can be a sense of familiarity and belonging in one’s home world, which is why it may be anxiety-provoking to abandon everything and…

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